Blade Sweet Blade

by Kitten   Mar 9, 2008


I flinch when you fall
I bleed when you glide
My eyes tear when your jagged
Be steady and glide tonight
I'm still waiting for your touch
Waiting for when you kiss
Kiss my flesh to relies
Relies the pain
Oh my blade
My sweat blade

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  • 16 years ago

    by Crystal Gaze

    The flow was a little rocky. And I think you could have made it better by lengthening it. However, I think you chose a relatable topic, and portrayed the connection people have with their own blades very well...

    5/5
    --Elly.

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