I've Changed

Great expression of the way so many feel 5/5

I have to say this poem is brilliant the show of emotion is just breathtaking the flow was ok but the best part i would have to say would be the fact that its so deep you know and once again i can relate to it great work 5/5

There comes a time in everybodies life when they get to the point where they just have to move on and find something new/better. Often times it takes people years to realize that the thing they were searching for all those years was themselves. A couple lines in the poem don't rhyme and the flow is shakey at times, but the overall wording and meaning when you look past that is strong. I gave it a 4/5 I hope you don't mind, thought you'd rather have an honest comment then a lie. Great job though overall :) GG23

I must say, this poem has so much emotion! and yet i also want to say, we do change that is a proven fact, whether good or bad we all do change some point in our life. so cheer up keep your head up things will get better through time ^.^ like my favorite mato...keep moving forward!

I love rhyming couplets :]
it has a nice wee flow to it
very well written
and some strong pharses :]