Rain Wolf

by Britni   Mar 10, 2008


I am a Sapphire color of the dark blue
Like the bottom of the ocean
Who has hidden her secret tears
On a wild stormy night
She has no fright
Willed as lightening
Willed as the wind
Willed as the rain
Willed as a hurricane
I then hear now the winds howl
Like the wolf who
Suddenly, Mysteriously appears
In the night's mist
That I call the rain wolf
And that is now what I call myself.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    I agree with Cayce... those 4 lines were amazing! The ending could've been better, but the concept was good. And the flow was good as well :P Nice write!

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    This was a very interesting poem. Your descriptions were really vivid. The flow wasn't that great, and I think you could have added a bit more to the story. Explained it a bit more.

    "I then hear now the winds howl"
    ^^"now" I think should be "how".

    Willed as lightening
    Willed as the wind
    Willed as the rain
    Willed as a hurricane
    ^^I really liked the repetion in those lines. It adds to the poem.

    Great job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

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