Wow! there are sooo many different emotions in this piece. wonderful!

Did you think our love was just a game?
When you looked in to her eyes,
Did you even remember my name?
Baby, what made you change?

^ i can deefinitely relate to this as well. good job!

Great job..i really liked it!...5/5

Wow your good!!! wow!!! i love it!

Beautiful poem :]
it was long but great
i loved the emotion
<3
Breeee

Beautifully written! normally a long poem like that start getting worse bt you wrote it very well!! another 5/5!!

5/5 gurl u did u really good on this poem..i usually did read long poems like yours but yours was worth the read. keep doing what u do b-cuz u do it o so well.

much luv
peachez

I remember when you told me,
You'd never lie to me.
Why the hell did I trust you?
You put me in a rough spot baby,
What the hell am I supposed to do?

i hate being put in that position : / they make you brake up with them! they give you no choice

I want back the guy I fell in love with.
The one who never lied.
The one I could confide in,
Who never made me cry.

every girl hopes for this but are always let down

great poem!
5/5 <33

Aww your poems are sooo good....your very talented......loved it......:)

Wow another one with the story of my life!! LOL!! This is crazy!!