Comments : Winter

  • 12 years ago

    by Cayce

    Wow, your descriptions were so vivid. The imagry was just truely amazing. I could picture a farm (i don't know why a farm. maybe it was the windmill?) with snow on the ground and the sun rising, and then as i read further I could picture all the snow melting (along with a snowman :]) I think your flow was just a little bit off in some places though, but nothing really major. The rhymes were pretty good. Amazing piece, darling! :]

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 12 years ago

    by Natalie

    Nicely done! Nice rhyming and beautiful flow. Keep it up!

  • 12 years ago

    by The Sky is Falling

    I think this poem is lovely. It's written so beautiful and you have many describtive (sp) words. Great job
    5/5

  • 12 years ago

    by xxxlOvElY sWeEtHeArTxxx

    WOW, i loved you imagry, the way you described everything, its like i could imagin it in my mind...

  • 12 years ago

    by noha

    Ohh , nice flow , i like it alot, its a gift to write ,keep it up

  • 12 years ago

    by vaibhav shah

    Beautiful description of the most terrific season ending on a note of optimism as winter melts gradually

  • 12 years ago

    by Kim

    Very nice poem.
    I especially like the ending.
    Gives me a true sense of passing time and changing seasons. ^^

    Keep up the great work.

  • 12 years ago

    by Lu

    The imagery of Winter within this piece is spellbinding.

    The leaves are brown, the sky is blue
    You can tell that winters not quite through
    The ground is snowy, but it's not that cold
    I'd sit outside all day waiting to get old
    ^^^
    The magic of nature as the last days of winter draw and Spring peaks it's head around the corner. You have described the last winter day here .... snowy ground, but not to cold. Days were you could sit out all day. .. because you know Spring is soon to come.

    The rhyme scheme a little distracting ... but still a fresh delightful read!
    Luanne

  • 12 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    I love your poem.
    such talent i can see.

    keep it up :) 10/10