Wow, your descriptions were so vivid. The imagry was just truely amazing. I could picture a farm (i don't know why a farm. maybe it was the windmill?) with snow on the ground and the sun rising, and then as i read further I could picture all the snow melting (along with a snowman :]) I think your flow was just a little bit off in some places though, but nothing really major. The rhymes were pretty good. Amazing piece, darling! :]
The imagery of Winter within this piece is spellbinding.
The leaves are brown, the sky is blue
You can tell that winters not quite through
The ground is snowy, but it's not that cold
I'd sit outside all day waiting to get old
The magic of nature as the last days of winter draw and Spring peaks it's head around the corner. You have described the last winter day here .... snowy ground, but not to cold. Days were you could sit out all day. .. because you know Spring is soon to come.
The rhyme scheme a little distracting ... but still a fresh delightful read!