The doorway to my soul, the doorway to hell

by David Ensor   Mar 10, 2008


Awoke to a fog i know too well
another day in my personal hell
not caring to see what is to come
more interested in whats left undone
i feel the weight of failure here
its voice still ringing in my ear
what will i do, where will i go
whats left to see
my minds a blank
confusions hold i cannot break
I've given up pursuit of joy
its existence puzzles me

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  • 16 years ago

    by Blissful

    The imagery you expressed here was mind blowing I could feel myself in your words. Well done in captivating me with your flow. *5/5*

  • 16 years ago

    by Jennifer RIP Lesthat Hayden

    A few punctuation issues but nevertheless it rocked. Man whenever I read your work I want Metallica to pop out of nowhere and sing it. ^_^ Man it will suck to find out if you hate Metallica...Lol. Five.