Aztec Death

by StandStill   Mar 12, 2008


An Aztec pyramid
steps leading to the sky
all who walk up those steps
know how it is to die

the blood running down
the slick red steps
every footfall
brings you closer to death

and i am on those steps
leading to the sky
so close to death
and i begin to cry

there are others around me
unable to run
fear, like an animal, holds hearts
but fear has just begun

a funeral procession
moving to a beat
until the reach the top
death clawing at them, head to feet

and the blood is running all around
every nerve is taught
an animal in a trap
forever caught

the closer to the top we get
the more the blood runs thick
and louder becomes the knife
more audible the exicutioner's click

the sky is so blue
so pure and clean
until i reach the top
by my eyes, this is the last thing that will be seen

pushed down on the hard stone
neck quickley exposed
suddenly fear is rising
adreniline has rose

heartbeat flying
wondering when
how fast is it coming
this terrible end

hot tears stain my cheeks
and i am crying out
my voice thick with fear
as i continue to shout

but there is nobody to save me
nobody around
this is where my battle ends
bleeding out onto the ground

the knife bites deep into my kneck
and around the world goes black
nothing left for me to fight with
nobody left to attack

and my blood joins the rest
as it flows down the steps
a sacrifice to a blood-thirsty god
the god of the Aztecs

~ this is a dream i had about a year ago. and i am unable to put into words the horror it still causes me to the day. a little background history:
the aztecs made human sacrifices to "appease the gods" most often, these ceremonies were held on the top of a stepped pyramid.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Alvaro

    A funeral procession
    moving to a beat
    until the reach the top
    death clawing at them, head to feet

    the last line i didnt like so much it,

    but other than that amazing poem i loved it, great haha the first stanza actually made me have to stand and change my sitting position cause i didnt know what i was in for with that kinda starting stanza, it caught my eye amazing

  • Omg im srry about the dream u have me babe..great poem but damn im sry

  • 16 years ago

    by deadly sun

    Omg, i love this. the images in my heaad were intense and i loved the way you worded it all. one of the most enjoyable to me.

  • 16 years ago

    by XxDead RoseXx

    This was very good, u r a very talented girl

    goo gurl!

  • 16 years ago

    by Curing the Comon Cliche

    WOW, this should be in ur featured, im not kidding. 6/5

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