by Alex Wong Mar 12, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about depression
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Tears, |
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This piece speaks many volumes of sadness. There are a couple of grammar mistakes in it but other than that the piece takes on it's own personality much like the subject of it's poem. You have done a great job with this work. I admire someone whom can write prose as opposed to a rhyme scheme. I find it quite difficult to write prose without it sounding silly. I love this piece and look forward to reading more from you. Take Care, Kay |