Naked in winterlight

by Mark   Mar 12, 2008


Shining bright in the winter light
listening to the tones
reaching for the deep blue wave
thats whistling in my bones

can't deny my feelings gone
now blowing in the wave
all the voices deep within
is making me their slave

fearless I became that night
I understood the pain
the trouble I have feared so long
it's time to break the chain

freedom is my goal tonight
my soul will find the way
a way into my paradise
and forever there to stay

the wind is cold but I resist
cause this is who we are
naked in the winter light
reaching for a star

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  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    I like it!
    I see what you mean by flowing with a little rhyming.

  • 16 years ago

    by DeepLife

    I like it!
    I see what you mean by flowing with a little rhyming.

  • Amazing poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Very, very nice! Bravo, interesting piece with truly refreshing message, I admire freedom of your words. Ending posses some original elegance, I honestly enjoyed in every line. You also have nice choice of words, great job!

  • 16 years ago

    by Sammerz

    I liked this poem it was really good
    5/5
    Good Job!!!

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