Heartless freak

I like this poem a lot! The word choice is good. And even though this poem can be taken many different ways because everyone has a different way of looking at things i like it a lot and think it is amazing. And in my opinion its not to brutal.

You done a pretty good job for someon with a writers block.
very good poem btw

You may have writer's block but this is an amazing poem and one that probably hits home with many people! The imagery is extremely vivid which makes the reader able to place himself in this woman's situation. One can almost feel the feeling of impotence that she has, wanting to be loved but receiving exactly the opposite. Although you say it for battered women, I am sure many unhappy women can relate to the character you've created. Brillant, top marks from me.

And remember, a writer's block is psychological. When you have a talent like this, all you need is a little inspiration. :)

Writes block or not this is still a great poem, tho the flow was a bit off - it didnt matter much tho it was still great

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Its good to try, and i think you good poet wish you good luck , i love it 5/5