My lonsome life

by santino   Mar 14, 2008


I'm alone
taking life on my own
seeing the new prospective of life
i feel like going on a drive
and saying goodbye
i feel dry
i want to cry
left alone to die
I'm not alive
i don't want to try
feeling alone just with..
darkness by my side
in touch with my other side
lonesome and dry
as i fall in a lake
my eyes red
i feel at stake
I'm going to take a deep breath
thinking in death
me yes I'm deaf
black is my crest
i have no name
now I'm not the same
suppressed in this game
in this session I'm with depression
hoping to be life's last session
thinking in my dark resurrection
i feel a great extension,
to life, this is my last session

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  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Uhm, hmm, I wasn't too fond of this piece. The flow is a bit rocky. And it kinda feels like you jump from idea to idea. But I like the idea behind this piece. And you portray the emotions clearly and very well. The ending, though, was amazing. :] Still, 5/5.