My twin soul

by hopefulsmile   Mar 15, 2008


Looking into your eyes
the same sight the same brightness
i don't know if it is happiness or sadness
nothing change since three years
the years that i know you
through the great time
we spend together
i will never imagine myself without you
through the bitter and the sweetest time
we go through
how could i live without you
but in this wild world
anything could happened
no one can know what his distany hide
that why i'm always afraid
afraid to lose you
afraid of getting far from you
all i'm downing here
really from my heart
my sweetheart
all my sadness
all my fears
one day i must leave you
but don't worry my friend
if i will die or travel far
i 'd write your name on the moon
so , every time you look up
you see how much you mean to me
in this day
the day that God send you out to this world
"i wish and i ask allah to make you happy ,
bless you, make you smile
guide you safely through whole your life
grant you wealth
give you health
and most of all
grant you paradise "

"love you sooo much my best friend
amina "

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  • 16 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Very nice!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Hiya,
    this poem brimming with emotions. You obviously have a big heart and lots of love to share.

    On a technical level. I personally would have liked to see this poem structured differently and for it's gramma to be tweaked. This would have made it easier and more enjoyable to read.

    I still enjoyed it though. 5/5
    Michael