Comments : A fathers final act

  • 16 years ago

    by XxBAYBiiGiRLxX

    Thats so sad..
    i'm sorry to hear that!
    well written!
    xo

  • 16 years ago

    by Jessie

    Incredible.... i award your courage for writing about such a touchy subject

  • Wow....amazing your really good

  • 16 years ago

    by JeriLayfield

    It's good. Sorry to hear that about ur dad.

  • 16 years ago

    by bekka dollface

    This is so sad :[
    very very good tho!
    keep up the good work
    && you should post up more :]
    id be sure to read/comment/rate it :]

  • 16 years ago

    by MusoXDanielle

    Such a sad story but a beautifully written poem!

    Keep up the good work!

    Danielle
    XxX

    5/5