This is very powerful. Awesome job. =]

This was gorgeous. The flow was a little off, but that was I think the only thing wrong with this poem. Besides that, it was perfect.
I really can relate to this feeling, and you put it into words so amazingly. Keep up the wonderful work!
5/5
~gabriella

Oh I just loved the emotion and mood you created with your use of words. They truly lifted me from my reality and took me to another world because the imagery was so vivid I could imagine everything clearly. Well done *5/5*

Hey,
You did an awesome job in getting your emotions in this poem, I like the questions you asked in the end of each stanza. When I was reading it, I could imagine everything in my head, great work 5.5
kisses stephanie

This is a very philosophic poem after my own heart

Well. The title was a bit weak for such an amazing poem. But anyway. The poem was very well written. And your choice of words were good. The poem flowed with itself. :]
"Because despite of these all,
This tangible creature where I'm entrapped
Seems lifeless in your eyes...
And a helpless ghost in your arms "

My favorite lines. :]
5/5.

This is really good and powerful!

I love this poem, its really good

Waw, i like this one as its my first time to read one poem writen in this way, i mean how to know that you alive or exist,5/5

Great poem, you got your emotions through really well
good job

xXxSLxXx

Wow, I've had the idea to write something like this before, but haven't as of yet, so I loved the idea. It is a heartfelt poem that asks a valid question, is existence the same thing as life, if not, how are the different, and how do you live? I really enjoyed this poem. nice JOB!!!

Very nicely thought out! Flow was great. Loved your word usuage! Keep it up.

Everyone else who's commented has pretty much taken the words right out of my mouth. Your poem was amazing and overwhelming. The emotions in such a piece were deep and your words were powerful. And the flow was perfect. :)

Powerful
emotional
great vocabulary
good rhythm

yeah i like it

I love the word content (context)

I loved it

Awwwwwwwww....
Lurrrrrrvvvvv the ending, wow wow wow

Very good poem. Very impressive writing. Well done!