Great freaking poem .....long but so worth it. it told a real story. really great .loved it

This is such a great poem, I love the story! This actually did make me cry and the words were so heartfelt. Great job!

Not a bad poem. it's really sad. did this really happen?5/5

LOVED IT can see where ur coming from :) oh did i say that i loved it?

Wow, this poem made me cry as well, great usage of words. very deep.
i loved it! :D

cait

Ummm wow, that was a long one. it had a good story line. but think that i should be just a little shorter. I think that alot of people would find it hard to read such a long poem. other then that it was great. 5/5

Great poem I love it. I could really feel the feelings in this one. Good Job!

Wow i love it

I love this poem great work.....lol

It's really long, but it's good. Great emotion. Loved it.

Well Done! Execelent poem. Very long but it kept me wanting to read on. Tells such a good story and very emotional. Keep it up.

DAMN. Long poem. Haha...But wow that was really good, did that really happen?

Tabi,

This was a long an heartbreaking story..
I wonder if it based on real life? Either way, you held my attention from start to finish.
Impressive poem, young lady!

Hugs,

5/5 Ingrid