The End

by Vincent Thornsberry   Mar 20, 2008


The end
Just a bend
In the road of life
A bend that takes your strife
Loved ones morn
You are reborn
Back to the world you loved
With the ones you loved

@ Vincent Thornsberry 2008

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  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    It does a great job at putting an image in the readers head, however there is no plot or lasting thought about it. its just a poetic phrase. And the last 2 lines having the same word at the end has a negative affect. im not sure what, but it just makes the poem less apealing.

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Good poem xx

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