Ode To Our Love

by Ben   Mar 20, 2008


Across the stars you glide,
Straight into my dreams,
No more need to hide,
So life like it always seems.
Love blossoms within our garden,
The sun shines so strong,
This love is never ending.
A heart now less barren,
I know this cannot be wrong,
This is only our beginning.

Into my arms you slide,
Take our feelings to the extremes,
My love grows and grows inside,
Shining under loves moonbeams.
Your love for me already proven,
This is where we belong.
Forever so knowing,
From the world a, haven,
Our love forever, lifelong.
Always growing...

©Ben Steinberg 2008-03-21

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  • 17 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    This poem really lifted my mood. The flow was very nice and the concept was beautiful. You've done a great job of word usage as well :) Good write.

  • 17 years ago

    by noha

    This is wawwwwwwww
    i love it mostly and nicely flow 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by GoodMorning

    "Love blossoms within our garden,
    The sun shines so strong,
    This love is never ending.
    A heart now less barren,
    I know this cannot be wrong,
    This is only our beginning."

    I love that part, especially the last line,
    it's my absolute favorite.
    It's so true, and lovely to hear from you.

    This entire poem is gorgeous, Ben.
    You're so amazing, you know.
    Such a gift you have with words.
    =)

  • 17 years ago

    by JEFF

    I like this poem, well writen. 5/5

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