I beleive it

Thats soo good!! x3

Its nice and short, and every straight to the point... :)
you really have the potential in writting good poems! keep up the good job...

I liked this......
I dont know if id call it a poem, cos usually poems rhyme, but poems also have flow, and this piece of writing has flow :]

I can relate to this aswell...

Especially the bit bout how after theyre gone theyre still making your cry etc etc

5/5

I can relate to this.. Keep on writing! :D

This onw waz really go0od...i luved it..=)

Great poem, full fo emotion that many can relate to. :)

This one actually made me cry, because ive been angry for this exact reason.... so thatnk you for writting such a great poem short but sweet.

Amazing<3

Very true
<3 it!

Edit:
Wrong yours. It's you're.
I should be capitalized

Response:
It wasn't bad. The rhyming was inconsistent along with capitalization. Other than that it wasn't horrible.

Rating:
Three.