Other Side Of Me

by A Phoenyx in Flight   Mar 20, 2008


Deep within
is a whole other side of me.
I hardly ever let it out.
Its dangerous and hungry for a fight.

When its out you better hide.
My blood begins to boil.
My anger rising.
I'm about to strike.

My eyes turn black.
My fists turn deadly.
My strength builds.
This is only the beginning.

My other side is wicked.
Its cruel and unforgiving.
It wont take a sorry or a plead for forgiveness.
its on the prowl.

My other side is dormant at the moment.
But its always lurking near the surface.
If i get mad its hard to control.
My other side is a fighter.

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  • 16 years ago

    by cory

    Good job i could feel the raw fury emanating from this ones core keep it up!!5/5
    Cory

  • 16 years ago

    by Cassie

    Now thats wat u call a really really good poem! really enjoyed that one best of luck! right more

  • 16 years ago

    by Bryan

    This is a very good poem nikkie, like the flow and the grammer is perfect, i give it a flawless 5/5!!! keep these great poems coming babe!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Mr. Darcy

    Supressed anger! You can see why most people 'keep it all in' I believe through writing we can release some of that anger and share our wisdom with others.
    You just have with me - thank you.

    Michael 5/5

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