Summer Sun

Ahhhhhhh...

So damn pretty!!

I love this piece, the whole effect of the poem leaves me with such a feeling of serenity that all I can do is smile and feel content =)

The imagery you placed in this is just beautiful, it creates striking visuals in the mind for me.

The only thing I didn't like was the closing line..to me, it just seemed kind of weak.

Apart from that though I really like this.

Um , this poem reminds me of a bunch of haikus .. Just all put together . I don't know , but i just don't really like this one . I can't help you .

I'm trying not to be crytical, because i think this was beautiful, though maybe if you didnt start with A and The in every line it might have flowed better but thats just my opinion.

Isn't it easy to write about beauty in nature?

This is a good poem, but I have a challenge for you:

Write a poem about beauty in something unbeautiful.

:) Nice job.

This was a short poem but nice it really lit up the page keep up the good work Plot121