Summer Sun

by Brittany C   Mar 21, 2008


Warm sun rays kisses my face,
as it gives warmth to everything.
Flowers growing proudly
reaching for the suns golden rays.

Little stream not to far away
flows gently and quietly past
trees so green and beautiful
seeming so soft and mystical.

The gentle breeze flows over me
holding me gently in it's arms.
The sun gives life to everything,
it is a very powerful thing.

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  • 15 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Ahhhhhhh...

    So damn pretty!!

    I love this piece, the whole effect of the poem leaves me with such a feeling of serenity that all I can do is smile and feel content =)

    The imagery you placed in this is just beautiful, it creates striking visuals in the mind for me.

    The only thing I didn't like was the closing line..to me, it just seemed kind of weak.

    Apart from that though I really like this.

  • 15 years ago

    by Hollymariee

    Um , this poem reminds me of a bunch of haikus .. Just all put together . I don't know , but i just don't really like this one . I can't help you .

  • 15 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I'm trying not to be crytical, because i think this was beautiful, though maybe if you didnt start with A and The in every line it might have flowed better but thats just my opinion.

  • 15 years ago

    by ALEX

    Isn't it easy to write about beauty in nature?

    This is a good poem, but I have a challenge for you:

    Write a poem about beauty in something unbeautiful.

    :) Nice job.

  • 16 years ago

    by Robert

    This was a short poem but nice it really lit up the page keep up the good work Plot121

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