Too shy to love...

by jojo   Mar 21, 2008


Would it really be so crazy
Or even kinda weird
If I told something secret
Something even I have feared
I wish you could understand
Wish with all my heart
Close my eyes and wish real tight
It is tearing me apart
I already know
The answer deep inside
But I will not dare give up
It is the only thing I have not tried
My chances are so very slim
My hopes are running low
Sometimes I even feel
You are the only one who would know
I know it sounds strange
Or even some bizarre
Cannot forget the crazy
That is beating at my heart
You probably think I am strange
Sometimes I think that as well
But the times I stay up thinking of you
It had been a living hell
So I better stop the wishing
Stop it all at once
Cause if I do not ever stop
Nothing will get done

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I really like this poem. Written with alot on your mind, 5/5. Em x

  • 15 years ago

    by Crossover

    Good poem.
    please check mine out and give mi a comment and or rate them. thanx
    cuz ur writing ability seems on top of the class

  • 16 years ago

    by MissMeg

    A very well written poem, i loved it. great job. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Great poem. Very well written. What I love about it the most, is how your personality shows. I think its absolutely amazing how you can show yourself in your poetry. Great write! 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by The Queen

    I think you meant Too shy and not To shy..Plus i will recommend if you will edit your poems and go for the spell check..As you can see when you go through your poems you will find a lot of errors its probably the apostrophe thing..so either remove it or i edit it..

    Otherwise, the poem is absolutely awesome..
    And i do agree this is the time you must do something let her know your feelings before its too late..

    Good job..

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