The world I created

by cataclysmicSoul   Mar 22, 2008


I have created a world,
to find myself,
said lies to support a lie,
and let truth disappear

I have build a cage,
in order to exclude bad,
to retain the peace,
to steer the destiny

I also excluded everything,
didn't let nobody come in,
even if i was free thereby,
i stayed lonely and alone

instead of excluding you,
i have locked myself in the cage,
i threw the key away
and my heart became a flint

A world have i created,
in order to find myself,
let therefore lie become truth,
and truth disappear

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  • 14 years ago

    by Em

    I can relate to this alot. We all build walls etc. Well written, 5/5. Em

  • 14 years ago

    by cici89

    In order to exclude bad,
    Kinda lost a little flow here

    didn't let nobody come in
    Maybe try didnt let anybody come in

    Other than those two lines i thougt it was amazing and you did a very vey good job. Your readers can feel the emotion you placed within.
    thanx for the comment

    suicidalkansas

  • 14 years ago

    by Aveena

    Its really nice
    ^^ yeah it is very powwerfull

    -thanks for the comment.
    -*aveena

  • 16 years ago

    by Grace

    I loved it =p

  • 16 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats really powerful x

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