I Wish...

by Elizabeth Morgan   Mar 22, 2008


I wish you could love me the way that I love you,
But I know its just too good to be true.

I wish you could see how much my heart breaks when your with her but I guess to you I'm just a blur.

So for now I'll just pretend, to love you just as a friend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Richard Crissman

    This is a very good poem, it flows really well, and you can feel true emotion. I think you should continue with it and make it longer though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    This poem is so wonderful, you have talent! I love your words, but I think you could make it longer, and put more emotion to it, to make it better. Keep Writing!

  • 16 years ago

    by tamara

    I loved this, i really relate and understand how this feels. i believe u have alot of talent so just trust yourself and u can write beautiful things.

    Good luck with everything
    tamara

  • 16 years ago

    by Dennis

    This is a good beginning...but I'm sure you're capable of coming up with much more. Expand your horizons a bit...if this is what you truly wish for....there's got to be a lot more you have to say :)

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