Shooting Star

by Brittany C   Mar 22, 2008


I saw a shooting star.
It flashed across the sky.
So fast it did fly.
It was an amazing sight.

The sky was dark.
It was mid of night.
Not a car in sight.
Just me and the dark

When I looked to the heavens.
The moon was full and luminous.
The stars were dazzling.
Their beauty so amazing.

It fell from the heavens.
A red blur in the dark.
As it cut it's path above
in the black velvet sky.

Then it was gone
just like that.
I had just enough
time to make a good wish.

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  • 12 years ago

    by Blackstar

    Like the way you describe what you see.
    5/5

    -blackstar

  • 16 years ago

    by jojo

    Wow, i really like this poem sweet and simple. Good job! You got me curious...what did you wish for? lol, take a look at mine when you get a chance

  • 16 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I love the description in this, very nice!