Do You Think About ME??

by Fabz   Mar 25, 2008


When You Think About Me,
Do You Still Feel Lust,
Does It Ever Cross Your Mind,
That We Could Get Back What Was,

When Your In Bed At Night,
Are Your Thoughts About My Kiss,
Or When Your Eating A Dinner For One,
Do You Ever Reminisce,

When You Get Up In The Morning,
Do You Remember What I Used To Say,
Do You Ever Stroke Over,
The Space Where I Used To Lay,

Do You Remember That Name,
I Had For You,
Do You Ever Smile Back At All The Little Things,
I Did For You,

Do You Ever Think Of Me,
Or Don't You Need To,
Cause Ever Since We've Broken Up,
It's Like,

All My Mind Seems To Do.

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  • 15 years ago

    by A Phoenyx in Flight

    Once again i can feel your emotions in this poem. You seem to hae a nack for that. Keep up the great work

  • 15 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    Hey again :] hmm, i don't really remember how the first version was, but apparently, i really liked it. lol. uhm, the first stanza was okay/good.. but the rhyme was a bit weak. i absolutely loved your second stanza. it was beautifully written and i can relate. Next stanza. the last two lines were a bit off, like it was forced. but still, the stanza itself, and what it's saying, is very nicely written. the fourth stanza is still a bit weaker than the rest. mostly because of the significant difference between the syllables of each line. maybe if you tried to even out the lines, it'd flow nicer. and the final stanza, a good finish to a good piece.

  • 15 years ago

    by Whisper

    Wicked good! omgoodness. This is going on my favorites. the rhyme scheme was the same way I write, so I was used to it.

    I can't even say how much I liked this one.

    Fantastic.

  • 16 years ago

    by FlawlesslyTarnished

    This piece was beautifully written. This piece was in better flow with itself than the other piece I read. I understand exacctly what you mean in the first stanza. [very nice] ;) And the second stanza was my absolute favorite part of the poem. I dunno, but something about it really gets to me, you know. The next stanza was nicely written, and kind sad. :[ The fourth stanza was a bit weak, but still good. And the final stanza was perfect. 5/5 :]

  • 16 years ago

    by sexyCheckers

    I Like this one ;D

    Alot...

    5/5

    xxxxx

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