Death's Team

by Marius Laun   Mar 26, 2008


Death's advocate,
He can see you.
forever watching
where you step,
While Death's right hand
Floats above your head,
Forever awaiting
His chance to strike.
Between these two
There's no escape.
No where to run
From what they stand for.
But fret not,
For your time
Has yet to come

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  • 17 years ago

    by firexdancer

    This poem was also extremely interesting, you have a really thoughtful outlook on life which you put into your poetry, making them really enjoyable to read.
    You're an awesome writer!
    4/5
    ~gabriella

  • 17 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    Interesting, very creative and intense poem. I like the topic and eerie atmosphere that you created. You managed to say so much within such short poem which is truly excellent and powerful.

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