by Marius Laun Mar 26, 2008
category :
Life, society /
other
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The keeper of peace |
by Kaila
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This was a tad confusing for me. |
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This is nicely written but it's not amongst my favorite writes from you. I don't want to offend you but I think that this poem lack captivating atmosphere that would pull the reader in the message that you're trying to portray. That is, of course, just my personal opinion. |