Feelings Of Love

by SH3S fiNAllY H3R3 l0V3 U N3NA   Mar 26, 2008


Im trying to find the words to say,
To tell you how I feel,
But surely words won't be enough,
To prove that this is real.

You make me feel real special,
Like I'm the girl for you,
But things are just so complicated,
What are we to do?

I don't want to give up,
Because what we share,
Feels so right,
For the both of us.

I hate when we dont talk,
I hate it when we fight,
Baby there is nobody else,
With you is where I want to be.

I don't wan to let you go,
I want you here with me,
I don't even have to tell you,
Because you know its true.

Baby you complete me,
I'm so in love with you,
I'll be by your side forever,
Until the day that I die.

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  • 15 years ago

    by H E Losey

    You started off GREAT then you lost your rhyme and the rhythm went with it. You also need to proof after posting as there are punctuation marks missing ie. fifth stanza first line "don't", sixth stanza first line "want" and third line "don't"
    Your thoughts are good.
    Asalways an opinion.

  • 16 years ago

    by Sarah

    Great piece

    A very short write with such BIG words.
    Good JoB!

    ~Baby you complete me,
    I'm so in love with you,
    I'll be by your side forever,
    Until the day that I die~

    This is so romantic and so divine!

    You wrote it so well.
    Keep writing! [5.5]

    Best wishes,

    Sarahxx

  • 16 years ago

    by L0V3 Mi fAMilY

    Aw babe! I really love this poem. I know you really love me! This was very beautiful! Te amo preciosa!! Muah!!

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