Message for Help

by ScarredToTheBone   Mar 26, 2008


No one to talk to, No one to tell
Only my soul, empty and bare
It sits there in silence
Soaking up my fears

Waiting to use them
As weapons of stealth
My soul is a traitor
And somehow it knew
How damaged I was

Loneliness had ripped me,
Taken piece by piece
Until the only thing left
Was my soul, Empty and bare

It took everything else,
And locked it away
Key less and broken,
I send you this now
A message for help
Please answer it now!
When he finds out I've sent this,
You'll read in the papers,
One final clue

Revenge will be taken,
My breath will be gone,
And you will feel guilt
For ignoring my song

*I need title suggestions!!!! Please:D

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  • 17 years ago

    by WaitAutumn

    Ooo nice title n_n true, it goes well with 5/5

  • 17 years ago

    by Ixora

    The stanzas are a bit chopy but all in all i liked the poem a lot. the vocabulary is very strong and you notice the emotion clearly.

    i love the ending stanza just very very well written.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xxxBrokenHeartxxx

    I think a good title would be message for help
    this is a really good poem and i can relate to what you are talking about. if you need to talk please come to me. I need someone to talk to too

  • 17 years ago

    by Alvaro

    Head up... but i know how you feel if the poem is how you felt, stare out to the stars and watch the amount of space.. and feel like your the only one in it. hmm beautiful poem flow was gentle, hmm comment back see what your thoughts are about mine 5.5

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