So sad hun but very good

*^*crow*^*

Wow, amazing. I can connect with the pain so well.
Keep writing, you have great talent,

Its amaaaaazing really :D it can work as lyrics of a song ;)
i like it so much... keep it up ;)

Wow...
That is one... well.. erh, it's a beautiful poem, with powerfull words.. and the subject is really something I don't read a lot. But I liked it. The flow was great too =] Like the repetition of;

just hate me hit me
take me and break me
abuse me and abandon me
leave me and walk away

Goood work =]
5/5
x

I can kinda relate to this poem...Im used to being that way too.
Its really good!

Wow that was an amazing poem hun... thanks for the comment by the way... keep writing love to read more of yours...

This poem is great!
but never let anyone abuse u this way..
those who do are not worth it,nd u're worth much more hunz ( i dnt knw u much,but i can tell from ur poems ^^ )

You commented on one of my works so i thought i'd do the same for you. i like this.. kinda sad but i'm feelin it. it's good

How sad, but good. it flows well.

-Syn

I appreciate the comments you left me. :]]
I really liked this piece.
It's short and simple,
yet straight forward so the point isnt missed.
Keep up the great work!

Megx333

That so sad. And hell ya a girl is worth alot, precious. But your poem means something really special. You had so much emotion in the poem. Good Job! 5.5

Loved this one, keep writing friend

-the forgotten poet.

Luv this one awww
it so gud yer a good
writer keep goin

Soo good !!

Liked the way that it flowed and the words were very emotional... good-job!

I thought it was a good sounding poem. But it was brutal in nature.

Good job. very sad and emotional. i can picture the scene in my head and to me that's the best poetry. =)

~*Caitlin*~

Thanx for your comment on my poem :D, happy u liked it.
>> this poem is amazing ..i like it

Thanks for commenting on mine i love this i can reeeally relate,well done!!xxx

This is a very violent poem 5/5 thanking you for the comments,,

xD Happy Thoughts xD
As Always,
~NinjaGirl~