My Guardian

Hey Anonymous Angel thnx youu I used your suggestion and I think the poem is so much better now.:)

Hey,
what a sweet thing to do, writing a poem dedicated to your dad, I'm sure he would love it;)

I liked you poem, There is only one little thing I didn't really liked: the one that gives me his sweater when is cold
even though he have a cold ---> The one that gives me his sweater when it is cold,
even though he might be freezing...I'm just suggesting that you replace the word cold, because you used the word twice in one stanza and that messes with the flow. but you have made a great piece 5/5
and welcome to our club;)
kisses stephanie

Well really nice poem, i would feel really nice if such was wrote to me at some stage in my life. Good work keep it up.

Well really nice poem, i would feel really nice if such was wrote to me at some stage in my life. Good work keep it up.

Aww how cute to write about your dad, you made me jealous somehow and now i should write about my dad too lol.

nice poem really, only few people appreciate what their parents do for them, you are a good child after all hehe.

i wrote a poem for my mom too its name"my mermaid" if you will read it i will be happy

thank you