by Kaila Mar 29, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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I have no room to breath without anyone to share it, |
by Tom Swart
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Pain comes with ones own understanding of love. with no pain there can be no love, with no love there can be no pain and the circle goes on. I agree it was a little rough but the emotion showed through and with polish may shine even better.keep the pens ink from drying, peace |
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A breath taking passionate poem |
by Syn
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I think this poem needs a little work with the flow, i found it a bit hard to read in some places. but the feeling and emotion are good. :-) |
by sweet escape
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I dont really get the poem that much. |
by mollymoo
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I loved this poem. |