Deaf of the heart

by Kaila   Mar 29, 2008


I have no room to breath without anyone to share it,
Collapsed my chest no longer rises or falls,
Aching and breaking my heart has no beat,
No rhythmic structure, nothing at all.

The room is colder without a person to hold,
No more scary movies, no movies at all,
Wasting the day away starring into the sky,
Collapsed my chest no longer rises or falls.

The scene outside is still painted beautifully,
I feel so empty without a person to call,
Sun setting along the lake so elegantly into dark,
No more scary movies, no movies at all.

Laughing at the kids playing across the street,
Hearing your laugh lingering in the back of my mind,
Stopping abruptly, tears escape within time,
I feel so empty without a person to call.

Watching your favorite show alone on the couch,
Even though the volumes blaring, it's too quite,
I feel as though you could here a pin drop,
Hearing your laugh lingering in the back of my mind.

Lying out in the grass, I see you waiting in your car,
Stereo turned up so loud I could hardly breath,
Then your foot connects with the grass,
Even though the volumes blaring it's to quite.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Tom Swart

    Pain comes with ones own understanding of love. with no pain there can be no love, with no love there can be no pain and the circle goes on. I agree it was a little rough but the emotion showed through and with polish may shine even better.keep the pens ink from drying, peace

  • 16 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    A breath taking passionate poem

  • 16 years ago

    by Syn

    I think this poem needs a little work with the flow, i found it a bit hard to read in some places. but the feeling and emotion are good. :-)
    4/5

    -Syn

  • 16 years ago

    by sweet escape

    I dont really get the poem that much.
    i understand the guy is gone and the girl feels empty without him. and that nothing is complete without him. but i feel as thought something is missing.

    the rhyming is all off, unless you weren't even trying to rhyme at all.

    i'm not sure but it is just not what i thought it would be. but it does have meaning behind it so i give it a 3/5.

  • 16 years ago

    by mollymoo

    I loved this poem.
    just the words and how its set up!
    it was great
    keep up the good work!