Good job on this x

I admit this poem is so short. but i can say this poem is extra excellent. specially the words you expressed here. very straight forward. a perfect stanza that can show alot of things in the lines...

if we have an art to write one stanza and show so many things in it. then sometimes there is no need to write so much or more stanzas.

you showed here an art. and offcourse poetry is also art. and only a true poet can read it excellent work here

Nice work i love it and i feel it so deep,each line got the meaning and well done ,keep write 5/5

It started out nice, but you wrapped it up with no real explaination of how you got from point A to point B, and with that, it went from having potential to a real cliche poem. I suggest that you lengthen it a bit, give it some more details, and really give us a connection from start to finish.

This piece was short but very nicely written and very well thought out. And the title really fit with the poem, the ending corresponded nicely with the title. .the emotions were nicely portrayed and a 5/5 from me. :]

Aww this was really sweet...really like short, sweet, and to the pint..
i loved it
great job
5/5
***aLy***

Nice and short, good rhyming.

"Sweet words,
Laying unsaid in this dusty mind."
^ I love the concept of sweet, but unsaid words. I'm also a big fan of using the word 'dusty', so this only heightens my opinion of this poem.

I like it very much. A lot to be said in that short little poem. A perfect rendition of lovers decay. Your poem flows well and offers much to the tongue as word choice was nice.

I enjyed it

It was catchy to me and had a cerain bounce.

We haven't lost interest,
We're just lost with time.
^^that is my favorite line or lines

It shows that you want time to slow down to spend time with this person which is cool

For me this even though it was short and simple meant a lot

5.5

Very good=)

Nice one,, The poem is short, but your words were expressive.. They were also meaningful.. Especially the few last sentences... Nice flow as well..
Well done..
Keep up the good work...

Very nicely done. It was short, but to the point, which i like. You had a nice easy flow. Your word usuage was wide. A beautiful piece. Keep it up.

It is soo cute!! Hehe.. I like the last two lines! We all have good times and moments! We're just losing the time!! =]

Excellent!

Great write, It was short..but you had really express your thoughts and your message as well. It was simple and unique for me!

keep on writing,

Veamm

Love your poem .. touched me, moved me .. simple yet the feeling is there .. for a 15 year old guy to make a poem like this, you're one helluva kind .. brilliant! :)

"We haven't lost interest,
We're just lost with time."

<33 It's really surprising how you made a poem that is really short,but still amazing!

Interesting piece, originally started, but I think that you ruined it's essence a little cause you rhymed and you could, for example, use much stronger and more descriptive word than-fine- but you rhymed mine and fine and with that forced rhyming your poem lost something of it's beauty, this is of course just my opinion and I don't want to offend you.
It is a bit cliche but I must admit you expressed a lot of emotions with this simple, short poem which is great.