In the mirror i see

by amila   Mar 31, 2008


In the mirror i see

a girl like me

very outspoken,smart and intelligent

but sometimes things feels as if its not meant

each day that goes by i wonder left to right

regardless of what others say or think thy shall not test my might

they always speak about she, but

its only what the mirror shows, half of me

In the mirror i see my dreams coming true

and i have family that says i beleive in you

i had friends that are now my enemies

but associates was what they were to me

my life is balancing on a scale from 1-10

thats running out of time

gotta stay in line and on my grind

I get tired of the frustrating days

different peers with different ways

i think that its just a phase

im lost in this maze

that holds all my pain

its so crazy it drives me insane, but

each day more is what i gain

although fear is what i hide

behind these pretty brown eyes

i stand and face the sky

thy shall not cry

in front of all the fear, pain, and miseries

i cant get rid of me, because

the glimpse of what the mirror has is me

at least thats what it shows that i see

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    I didn't really like this as a poem, but the idea was good. I didn't like it because of the rhymes mainly, and because the piece lacked power. The best stanza was by far the third, but, but the rhymes went on too long.

    Brad