Who can you trust?

by Ados   Mar 31, 2008


Who can we trust in this devilish place,
everywhere i look lies a dobbing mace.
dibbing dobbing telling things,
the anger, sadness, hate it always brings.
who can we trust to run our lives?
money is the key i wonder who drives.
who can we trust to help us along,
who can we trust to keep us strong.
the answer is a one true friend,
together will always mend.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Love vs Fate

    This is a great poem, just try to be a little more descriptive so that the reader knows what image your trying to send out. but overall i will give you a 4 cuz i see nothing that is bad in this poem but a little more improvement may be needed but overall great job, and best of luck with your other poems, ill go have a look at them now too.

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