Whale

by Ares   Apr 1, 2008


The sea,
it captures me,
it makes me live,
to face the day.

I swim across the open sands,
I feel the cold and salted rush,
making me feel beautiful.

the sea,
it makes me free,
like a story told,
watch me unfold.

I swim across the open sands,
I feel the cold and salted rush,
making me feel strong again.

I have to make it home tonight,
to meet my wife and our love,
I just have to dive again.

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  • 17 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    Awww, that was good, babe!

  • 17 years ago

    by miracle

    I love this

  • 17 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    Your poems are really good...you write of things I've never thought of writing about...and you do it well, I think I might try doing something /completely/ different soon...ah, you've inspired me!!

    Really good job!

  • 17 years ago

    by Goodbye

    Oh, I love to see as well.. I feel so calm staring at see.. It is really a symbol of freedom to me.. And this poem reminded me about the movie "Free Willy"'s... So sweet and good

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