Waw, its beautiful poem and i see how its harf for any one to forget the beautifuland true love inside but we cant do we cant forget but we try to live and find new feeling not to forget the past but to live the futuer,its to clear in your write how its hard to forget eyes,smile,face,hand,even talk,i feel that too ,well done 5/5

This is a wonderful. Sad feeling beautifully expressed. I can see your pain to forgetting... Time will heal our wounds..I wish you all the best in future...

This is really wonderfull n simple poem of true feelings.Really liked it
keep up the good work.
5/5

God bless u

Marvellous

AMAZING!!!!!
really loved the way you put it all together
5/5

Emotions come straight to the poem... the pain of losing one is showing here... nicely written... good flow in the poem. Well done!

Awwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww.....i cn really relate to this!...its xactly how I FEEL..wooow...manshaAllah...5/5

Lovely written !
Many of us do the same
5/5
Cheers
Biya

Awesome..!!..ur poem is so lovely and it has lotta feelings and emotions inside of it...great job Ibrahim..keep it up5/5

Nice one !! full of emotions and feelings. Well written and easy rhyme.

I liked how you kept repeating this part, I think it made the poem stronger and made it more affirming. And then how you changed the second part of it that was really brilliant.

"Said I'll forget you but I lied
This is really what I feel inside
Too many words in my bloody heart
Too many but still too few
To heal my wound tonight
How can one forget this face?
How can one forget these eyes?
How can one forget such a smile?
However hardly he tries"

I think you should change "however hardly he tries" to "No matter how hardly he tries".
Anyway overall good job, keep it up.

Wow this poem makes me think of a song it really just grabs my heart and it flows so nice! wow you are such an amazing writer!

Wow this poem makes me think of a song it really just grabs my heart and it flows so nice! wow you are such an amazing writer! 5/5!

I love this poem
Its so sweet
Well done ;)

Very powerful feelings i like it

Thank u very much Mira

This is very beautifully written, and I love how "Said I'll forget you but I lied
This is really what I feel inside" is repeated throughout the poem.

Thanks a lot angel , appreciate a lot ur decent comment :)