WOW! great poem Amber. Very, Very descriptive. Makes me wana cry, almost did 2. (seriously). u go girl!

Amazing. 5/5

Wow! that is the only thing that i can say about this cause it is just....wow!
**harlea

Good poem.
I liked it;; alot..
5/5

Live the way sadness has been potrayed in this poem. Nice work keep up.

Live the way sadness has been potrayed in this poem. Nice work keep up.

Amber, I rated this poem a 5/5 simply because the words you chose, the stanza in this line i loved...Sadness, Oh how it overflows
my body. It runs in my blood
like a toxic, like a virus, a
killer virus.

such beautiful description, it's a sad poem but you got the message out to me. I love this poem even though it's sad. I can feel the pain, the hurt inside.I'm sorry you have to feel this way but hey, chin up little one, I'm always by your side. Keep up the great work and keep the poems coming. I can't wait to read more hun.

I love! your poem, is one of a kind, I love your topic and your setting for the poem.

Nice poem, it makes people feel your sadness, xx