Really nice poem, so sorry if its real, but i think he doesnt deserve you, its his loss and not yours, i really like how you stress the how could you? I can relate to this poem at many occasions in my life..Great work keep it up and hope all goes well for you.

Good work!

i love it!

sad but honest

he's obviously an idiot and you could do so much better. just :) babe

keep up the good work

xx

This is a sad poem, these guys seem to be messing it up for everyone else. He'll get his Karma though..

Wow honey! thats amazing!!! i love it 5-5!!! yay lol! great jobbbbb!!!!!!!!!!!!

This one is definitely my favorite, it reminds me how I felt with my first love.

Wow sweetie! thats a strong poem! i love it! and i know what that feels like to! xoxoxo love ya lots

Nice one

keep it up (:

Its great!
hope you'll get over him soon..
take care!

Girl, that is beautiful. I'm so sorry about your relationship. i'm going through some of the same pain. good poem though.

A really beautiful poem!
i feel the exact same way at this moment...
it has great descrptions and wonderful feeling...
5/5

<3
XxAshleyxX

A nice poem. I like it.

Wow....beautiful is all i can say to that

Realllly nice poem :) kinda sad.but i wish u are not going through this?if yes,then he is @&^#$&*$^..
ur poem goes straight to my fav.poems list :)

Wow this poem was really nice and if you feel this way you should let him know.=)

Real

I love your poem, is great work, did this happen to you?

Great poem :) i know exactly how you feel.

I love it! god it desceibes so much,i know excatly.

I loved it <3
thanks for your comment
but this was sad
but very good jobbbb :]

Wow! ANOTHER great poem!!!! careful tho I always seem to get a good poem streak and hv tons of good poems pouring from my mind. Thn nothing and if it does come out they're horrible. So b careful!

bt anyways 5/5 poem!!