Weekends

by Ares   Apr 8, 2008


It's been a ride of joy and lust,
since we previously met,
do you want to grab a drink and,
reminisce about the past,
it's clear that we have,
made a connection.

but it's cool,
I understand,
what you search for,
in a man.

will I reach,
up to your standards,
will you love,
me tonight?

life's so much better in the weekends,
you don't frown at a big mistake,
since we broke up on a weekend,
I can't tell if you're for real or fake.

so your dad left your mom,
and your sister is a mess,
would you still care to enjoy me,
you have something to confess,
I was only a mistake from the days,
when you were young,
but that won't bother me, no,
not tonight.

will I reach,
up to your standards,
will you love,
me tonight?

life's so much better in the weekends,
you don't frown at a big mistake,
since we broke up on a weekend,
I can't tell if you're for real or fake.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Hidden1

    I know that's right and I can feel this poem. the weekend is where I can let my hair down and live freely. I always ask myself if I can live up to the expecation of my lover for that particular time . Good stuff.

  • 16 years ago

    by Gabba Gabba Hey

    This poem would make an excellent song--another good one from you!

    Yes, Muse is quite appropriate..!

  • 16 years ago

    by Goodbye

    "will I reach,
    up to your standards,
    will you love,
    me tonight?"

    This is my favourite stanza..

    Well, about the poem, it tells a story..I would say it is pretty typical...Scandinavian story.. Young people go out on Saturday, get drunk, meet someone and if things develope they getting bed together.. (forgive me if my vision differs a lot the one you have..)

    It sounds like the poet (if this is related to your life) loves weekends, and spends happy youth time.. :)