*Snap* I love it. It has the truth of being a child and then turning into an adult. even now with my part time job I have to say 'yes mama' or 'yes sir'

wounderfuly done

5/5

~Victoria

Whicked nice poem...loved it!

I love this....i wish i could write like you

Its good
can u help me make one

I really enjoyed reading this poem, though I wish there was more in the middle.

When we're born it's not our choice,
so at first it cannot be our fault,
we're simply a puppet on strings with a voice,
until it's all put on a halt.
^^
Really great beginning. "puppet on strings with a voice" is probably my favorite line out of the entire poem.

--After being a teenager comes the adult years,
where the sign of being a puppet we forget,--
^^
This pretty much explains how most adults really do seem to forget what it was like to be a child and to be curious about everything around them. It almost makes me sad that one day it could be me who forgets...

I really liked this :)

.Kay.

Wow that was really good....i loved reading it.

Omg i love this poem!! i give it a 5/5!! XD

Nice very nice

Nice...I'm mentally breaking down at the moment...hehe...well, anyway, looking thru all my old poems, and it shows how much i've grown, and wot i've been thru in the past, i probably could go thru it again...there's alwiz hope isn't it...hopefully i could find mine...

Nice poem its very true though i agree...I had writers block for like 2 years and im gonna start writing again check out my poems

The beginning of this poem was great!!!!! It was amazing.

My favorite line would have to be:

"we're simply a puppet on strings with a voice"

You have a good talent So keep it up!!!!

5/5

Wow I found this poem really interesting, to be honest I wasnt expecting it, the meaning in the poem was captivating and portrayed very well, your very imaginative. The idea of being a puppet has been played upon a few times but your style of writting was different and I really enjoyed reading this piece =]
Excellent job 5/5

Lol loved humor in it. Growing up was beautifully and creatively captured within this piece. Excellent!!!

Lol loved humor in it. Growing up was beautifully and creatively captured within this piece. Excellent!!!

Truth wrote so well! Excellent write!!