by Ares Apr 9, 2008
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
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A billion degrees, |
by neo
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Superb......when is the next colab????? |
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Not one of your best poems, but I can see the potential here. The type of 'alright' that you should probably use is 'all right' it just fits better. I like the refrains though! |
by Goodbye
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You are very good at painting a scenery...for a moment...I was with you...in mafia.. Great job!! :) Marvellous.. |