Heaven's Floors (Senryu)

by Sherry Lynn   Apr 10, 2008


Golden bricks glisten
beneath white glowing robes
Welcome God's children

~Sherry Lynn Hull Richardson

Written for Style of the week in WWJW

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  • 13 years ago

    by Silent Girl

    I love the flow of the words :)

  • 16 years ago

    by D Jon Versatino

    Great!

  • 17 years ago

    by Lonely Rider

    Beautiful and very sweet....

  • 17 years ago

    by Rachel RTVW

    Nice job with this form. Beautiful imagery. It paints a vivid picture in a few short lines.

  • 17 years ago

    by Bradley Peter

    This was nice, but only for a Senryn, in my opinion.

    Brad

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