Right under your arms.

by Nikki   Apr 11, 2008


I dont know what to say,
Somehow, you have got me right under your arms,
Right where you want me,
Dont you see what you do to me,
You make my skies turn blue,
And those rainy days turn into sunny,
You make me smile when everything feels like its about to fall a part,
And make me laugh when,
I feel like theres no tomorrow,
You put that tomorrow back,
Every time when I was stuck in my past,
Hearing you sing,
And getting your hugs,
Always brought me right back to reality again,
Being there with you,
Made me see things more clearly,
When I am with you, I find meaning,
I find that I have a purpose in this life,
You make me feel so wonderfully amazing,
And when I hurt,
I see you, and all the pain flows away,
You have me right under your arms,
just where you want me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by robin milford

    Good poem I liked it

  • 16 years ago

    by Nic

    I loved it
    it is awsome really
    keep writing i cant wait to read more

  • 16 years ago

    by WrittenInTheStars

    This poem is awesome. I thought it flowed well and came from the heart. I just saw a few lines that need a little fixing up, but nothing dramatic.. Great job.

  • 16 years ago

    by KJ

    Very good write
    I really liked the fact the way you didnt use rhyme in this poem, but at the same time you used terrific voice and perfect use of vocabulary. The only thing that I would change, if anything:

    "And those rainy days turn into sunny,"
    ^^I think you should edit it into saying:
    "And those rainy days turn sunny"
    Sunny is an adj, so you really dont need the "into". just a suggestion tho =)

    Overall, beautifully written
    5/5