I like it but still a bit of mystery. ((5))

Amber!! THIS POEM IS AMAZING!!
you used so many good stanza's!
The words you chose just caught my eyes...You have me so wanting to just give you a hug! You are a talented writer! never forget that okay?? 5/5 keep it up and chin up for I am here for you at all times!

I love the passion in your poems and like to poit out if you rhym your poems you will come out as a top rated wrighter on this site:)
amazing poem all together 5/5

This is a great poem amber.5/5
**harlea

Nice poem

Well done very nice, enjoyed the read

Your pain is expressed so clearly in this poem, confusion spills out in your words too.
Just to point out one possible error

I don't want to make your
life harder than it already
is. Trust me, I know that once
you find out you will run off
in frustration, which will only
led me to more pain and
misery and to wishing I
was gone.

Could it be lead me to more pain?
Hope you dont mind me pointing this out.

Great write