I remember when her mom died...i feel bad i haven't really talked to her at all....she's in my prayers.

the poem was amazing. so beautiful and simple...but at the same time, deep and moving.

i pray for her and her family, i really do. you're an amazing friend, misa, for writing this..

What a great and heartfelt dialouge you have penned into a sadden poem.

I could feel every ounce of hurt, anger, and betrayel that you have lovingly penned out.

This one poem took me back to my own loss and the grief that overwhelmed me.

I found one small error

"For she looks beautiful, does help you feel less blue,
And she has no wheelchair! My girl, all I say is true,"

Instead of Does feel less blue... maybe try Hope you feel less blue or something like that.

Over all this is wonderful

~~Sher

This was such a sad and heartbreaking poem. Even though it didn't happen to you personally you can feel the emotion in every word. It either affected you so much that you felt a great deal of saddess from this or you just wanted to do something nice for your friend or both. You can feel how much your friend loved and looked up to her uncle. It's hard when loved ones die. I've been fortunate not to have this happen to me ..yet, but it will soon. Everyone has to die. It sucks, but we have to learn to deal with it. :\ I'm really sorry this happened, and I hope your friend is okay. I'll keep her in my prayers.

Goodbye Uncle George, I love you too, I'll miss thee,
I know now that you feel free,
But don't forget me,
Goodbye Uncle George, I love you too, I'll miss thee

^^ That was a great closing stanza.. Saying goodbye. It almost brought me to tears.

Keep writing and stay strong!
Cayce

You have woven a sad heart wrenching piece here dear heart.
Very creative how you wrote from the voices of both persons. You could feel the emotions from both sides and it gave the reader a very clear image of the sadness that girl was feeling ....

My dear girl, I know it is hard but be strong,
Remember my soothing song,
It will help you feel that nothing is wrong,
But this is where I now belong,
And you will be here too before long,
Goodbye my girl,I love you, and remember stay strong,
^^^
Very touching ! I can almost hear the whisper as the voice begins to fade away.

My condolences to your friend on this day of sadness.
Very beautiful of you to dedicate a poem to her .... if only the world had many more friends such as you.

Touching read, woven from the deepest of your heart
Luanne

Wow that was amazing. It was so full of emotion and passion. The flow of words were great. Good Job 5/5

Awwwww, Im sorry about your friends uncle. very nice poem, way to dedicate it to a friend especially! Keep it up! 5/5

Very emotional and I could tell that it came straight from the heart which made the emotions that much more real for me. It was filled with beautiful meaning and strong power that just left me deeply saddened. I am sorry for your friends loss but I'm sure you are there guiding her through this saddness. Beautifully done in creating such a wonderfully heartbreaking piece. *5/5*

My god.........this poem is soooo wonderful and emotional. its so amazing!! the rhyming behind it was so great! very powerful message...i smiled reading this poem. it shed light on my heart as my eyes read over the words. beautiful poem....very very beautiful

That was so sad, but beautifully done. 5/5

Again, this is so heartfelt, and your rhymes and rhyme sequence are really interesting. i especially love how its in conversation form - great job on this one :)

This is really sad but has alot of beauty in it. 5/5, Em