A Thought

Missing some one and live in their memory is not easy I know how dificult is this.
you are great our your love is also great.

I liked you Then when I first read ur poems..
I like you even yet..
Keep up the good work...
Fr.Meeh

"All memory lanes look too deserted & old
Yet Footprints left yesterday on shores are still alive
Despite changed seasons ticking by again over years
The Closed book opens a buried past back in time."

^^ loved this stanza.. specially the last line...its so beautiful...
very good poem...

Oh my God karan what a lovely poem ! Its one of my favorite :) , Its the best poem among your all poems :)

Although whole poem is lovely but I like two stanzas very much;
All memory lanes look too deserted & old
Yet Footprints left yesterday on shores are still alive
Despite changed seasons ticking by again over years
The Closed book opens a buried past back in time.

Each cracked mirror bit reflects it's own truth
But what about the truth hidden within?
All are eager, anxious to count smiles
No one sees the pain within

Keep writing such poems ok
May Allah bless you more skills and truth Ameen
Biya

Yes, memorises... It is unbelievable how we can not forget some memories...even from a childhood.. Like the scent of some flowers..I can never forget how the flowers smell sweet in my granpa's garden on summer time.. Or how something tasted..

Good poem,
Keep on writing ;)
-your sister :D-