Seasons

I like your poetry :)

This was such a breath taking read!! The word usage panted such a wonderful yet violent image.

"Rolling thunder echoing in my head
Blue fire lighting up the sky
Battling to chase winter away
The seasons fighting for survival
All four each an eternal rival"

Was totally gob smacked with the depth of description within this stanza and found myself drawn in from here! Fantastic!!

Bill
Wow you have created some amazing imagery with the stroke of your pen, my friend.

Old man winter is on the run
Bolts of lightning crashing at his heal
Leaves, buds and blooms laughing in his wake
As the sea of grey and doom
Turns to green and bloom
^^^
Awesome!

Great to see you back writing again ... and really great to see you back.
~Hugs~
Sis

Excellent work...What a beautiful picture you have painted before us...

"Rolling thunder echoing in my head
Blue fire lighting up the sky
Battling to chase winter away
The seasons fighting for survival
All four each an eternal rival"

"Old man winter is on the run
Bolts of lightning crashing at his heal
Leaves, buds and blooms laughing in his wake
As the sea of grey and doom
Turns to green and bloom"

^^ loved these stanza... perfect imagery...perfect description.. so wonderfully you have captured the beauty of different seasons...
really great job..

Bill
What an awesome nature piece you have penned. Such vivid imagery and word choices.

Old man winter is on the run
Bolts of lightning crashing at his heal
Leaves, buds and blooms laughing in his wake
As the sea of grey and doom
Turns to green and bloom

I loved this stanza. The images I see in my mind of the lightimg chasing the winter away,
Excellent job my friend.
((Hugs))
Cindy