Rambling

by she   Apr 24, 2008


More of rambling than a poem

I'm sorry,
I don't know what I did,
Tell me,
Was it something I said?
Why did you hit me?
You say I deserved it,
Okay,
But why?
I want it to stop,
I'll do anything; I'll correct what I've done,
Even change who I am,
Just tell me,
What I did,
What made you treat me like this!

*confused,frustrated*

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  • 15 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Awwww *hugs huny* xxx

  • 16 years ago

    by neo

    So much expression. never change for anyone. u r a talented writer 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Why did you hit me?

    ^^ Abuse is such an overlooked thing, but is so common now. I hope you're alright.

    Remember to keep writing and venting your feelings. It really does help.

    Cayce xx

  • 16 years ago

    by StandStill

    Oh, hun....this is so sad...so horribley sad.

    Why did you hit me?
    You say I deserved it,

    ^^ NOBODY deserves abuse. nobody. not in any way, shape or form.....so "you" is a very incorrect person.

    5.5

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