Joy

A beautiful short and sweet piece of work!

I look into your emerald eyes, my heart stars to turn into liquid fire

that was my favorite line. it was powerful, keep up the nice work!

Ashlei.

Very cute poem! =] i liked how u told what he deos and what happens 2 u. very nice job =] 5/5

~tia

I really like this poem its very good!! 5/5

Love is responsilble for many things. You have mention, but a few.

Well done

Michael

"I look into your emerald eyes, my heart stars to turn into liquid fire"

Good choice of wording, this creates a clear picture in my head.

"when your hot like the sun hand touches my icy arm,"

I like your contrast here with hot and cold. Gives the poem depth.

"seeing you laugh makes me laugh, seeing you smile makes me smile"

This is sweet and cute I like it. Many can relate to this:D

"just by your presents you bring me joy. "

Good simple ending, this is the poem that you would give to the person you love on valentines day, or just because.. it was a cute poem I enjoyed reading this. :D You should check out some of my poetry sometime :D